Monday, January 23, 2012
by Detective Bailey Krieger
As there have been so many reports on being Daily Blogger, how do I make
mine interesting? Well, I guess you can say I’m on a hunt for a story. As class
blogger today, January 23, 2012, I was looking at what could possibly go on in
this school. Along side me was my trusty iPod touch Dr. Watson
and my English
class as a lead. After lots of pictures of the evidence and 50 minutes later, I
concluded that you could learn a lot of simple ways to fix a sentence. A comma there
and a conjunction there, and you fixed a run-on sentence. A word deleted here
and one changed there, you got rid of ‘deadwood’. But something is bothering me
that I will have to keep working on.
The events outside of English class on
January 23, 2012, still remain a mystery.
As there have been so many reports on being Daily Blogger, how do I make
mine interesting? Well, I guess you can say I’m on a hunt for a story. As class
blogger today, January 23, 2012, I was looking at what could possibly go on in
this school. Along side me was my trusty iPod touch Dr. Watson
and my English
class as a lead. After lots of pictures of the evidence and 50 minutes later, I
concluded that you could learn a lot of simple ways to fix a sentence. A comma there
and a conjunction there, and you fixed a run-on sentence. A word deleted here
and one changed there, you got rid of ‘deadwood’. But something is bothering me
that I will have to keep working on.
The events outside of English class on
January 23, 2012, still remain a mystery.
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